On “lod_007.png” there’s a mistake of “Funuuu! I won’t able to take it anymore!”
You’re missing the “be”.
On “lod_009.png” there’s also, what I believe to be a mistake, “My glans feels good”, which I would guess should be “My glans feel good”.
With this second one, a friend of mine pointed out that “glans” is singular though, maybe it’s just me being picky with how it sounds to me.
Other than that, it was fine.
Keep up the good work~
Jun 15, 2012 @ 09:32:49
Cute. Many thanx.
Jun 13, 2012 @ 16:53:25
A nice release, however I noticed two mistakes:
On “lod_007.png” there’s a mistake of “Funuuu! I won’t able to take it anymore!”
You’re missing the “be”.
On “lod_009.png” there’s also, what I believe to be a mistake, “My glans feels good”, which I would guess should be “My glans feel good”.
With this second one, a friend of mine pointed out that “glans” is singular though, maybe it’s just me being picky with how it sounds to me.
Other than that, it was fine.
Keep up the good work~
Jun 14, 2012 @ 07:37:08
Glans is singular, thus “My glans feels good” is correct.